as far as you can
see hundreds on sand waiting
for citizenship
what country please
we swam a very long way
eye of the storm
jellies everywhere
translucent hot pink ribbons
each different motif
one tiny bubble
shaped like baby octopus
totally clear
giant pink hearts
sporting two long tentacles
twelve inches long
circular brown
triangular his outer
different from others
floating butterfly
saltwater in your veins
one in every crowd
finally got it up
troubles with his blue kite
flying in the sky
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” Bodies in the sand
to get away from it all = beach boys / kokomo
where we wanna go ”
errinspelling 
beautiful, clever and colorful…and wistful? or is that me? xo
oh no it’s me. my picture was there when i looked up.
xo
🙂
i got confused when i saw me & i forgot to look for yours
Love “Kokomo”–wistful…like two giant hearts in the sand and floating butterflies, veins full of saltwater….
thank-you sirena . i reported the facts as i saw them .
i’ve got saltwater in my veins .
you have to close your mouth at sea.
you’re musial …,i’m musical
it’s like koppleman & katz in every way except no way at all.
i can’t seem to keep it closed. it always wants to breathe.
i feel you man: have that same problem…just like beavesaid to the lady after he poked holes in the box she wrapped..”he got to breathe don’t he “..u missed a good show
i’m so sad i missed that show.
i’m so sad too.
you didn’t miss it; it comes on every day on antenna or me tv.. i don’t know time, b/c the channels don’t work here , like 50 feet away from where they worked.the wireless co. went into the tv room & messed them up.if i get the cable co. to come, then i might not have wireless.
awesome poem ,you have a unique ability to draw with words.Thank you for liking my 300th.post.Have blissful day.jalal
you do jalal.
thank-you
This is superb. How wonderful to imagine the voice of the jellyfish. I am very, very impressed.
lol thank-you son. i mean dan.
Perfect.
“jellies everywhere
translucent hot pink ribbons
each different motif”
Magical, my friend!
You paint such wonderful images with your words-I feel like I am there and can take in the sounds and colors-
Errin…in case you need it. CYBERHUG. I sense a disturbance in your force these days. I might be wrong, and if I am, a hug won’t hurt, anyhow, dammit!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Makes me want to go to the beach big time!
hey, errinspelling! ‘been thinking of you–sending you a positive vibe. thanks for the likes, and happy to see you. hope all is well, or better anyway. xo
How beautiful. Not sure where you live, but in parts of Oz? Ohhh the jellyfish are huge and sting really bad! Lol Still to look at them in the water? Beautiful! I suppose it’s their home anyway, not ours, right? Lol Loved your post. Hugs Paula xx
lol.thank-you paula.supposedly long tentacles sting, but i’ll wait for them to tell me …
Hahaha! hugs xxxx
hugs xxxx