paradise posing
photographer’s pictures painting
peak perfection
uninhabited
having the beach to ourselves
no one can build here
her will giving birds
the sands next door forever
beautiful conch shells
mile of ecstasy
no one in each other’s way
quiet roominess
birds in the trees
whispering thank-yous while egret
poses elation
___
(thinking they’re egret
walking like an egyptian
steve martin king tut)
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You keep coming up with marvelous pieces like this. I love it!
thank-you kp!
Awesome poem.Painting with words is an art.Cheers.jalal
thank-you very much jalal
I love, love, love that first verse-I have images of paintings magically being created in my head-wonderful!!
thank-you for your magical words littledog
birds in the trees
whispering thank-yous while egret
poses elation
this is truly inspired poetry err in,
and a mile of bird and sand ecstasy?
please tell me where lol!
next door.someone ,a female human, left the land next door to the birds & no one can ever build there
What a great opening! Followed by a huge sense of the vastness of the setting with aural accompaniment – very well done
“birds in the trees
whispering thank-yous while egret
poses elation”
#Goosebumps