a trip to paradise for sale or lease haiku

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furnished beach condo
one thousand dollars each month
six months or longer

non smoking indoors
one hundred steps to the sea
you can ride the tram

blue granite kitchen
air conditioning is new
new appliances

a quiet top floor
parachutes drift in the sky
your living room view

seven outdoor pools
beach club ,tennis ,ducks ,putting
indoor pool also

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15 thoughts on “a trip to paradise for sale or lease haiku

  1. hey, this is fantastic. Your work is filled with refreshing wit, like a stiff negroni on a cloudy beach. Even if that analogy was rubbish, the compliment is there somewhere.
    Anyway I’ve nominated you for the Liebster Award – I wouldn’t be surprised if you already had it a few times over, but just know the appreciation is there!
    Here’s my post and the link to the rules etc.
    Don’t worry about accepting if the thought doesn’t cater to you, just know I’m appreciative of your words!
    https://camillaeustance.wordpress.com/2015/05/08/i-got-an-award/

    Keep doing it all.

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