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twenty four hours
a long line of fish swimming
away from the sea
where are you going
do you have coups in the sea
searching for something
you’re going to save
ali mohammed al nimr
no humans can stop
terror on the land
suddenly they’re twice as fast
flying walendas
twenty at a time
please do not tickle the shin
only your fancy
ten thousand sea birds
nary a one go hungry
fish for everyone
couple sits in surf
middle age middle of fish
walendas jump high
the man just stood up
came to ask if i would like
“see sharks in the wild”
i shake my head no
three very large sharks dining
of course, the minnows
i backed up ten feet
now hundreds of mullet jump
shark the reason why
we’re only five peeps
against these three south beach sharks
they’re full to the gills
actually just moi
four halfway back to hotel
after last haiku
just three sharks and me
back up again to dry land
and do the mouse scream
scarier alone
all three perpendicular
you have shark side view
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9/26/15
All of them top rate;
LOVE this fine offering
Best Always
john
thank-you johnpoetflanagan
Thank you. Mind blowing. Fabulous.
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thank-you very much david . you , are fabulous and overwhelmingly impressive.
Looks like scary movie with the sharks!
wow, I love these linked haiku tercets. bravo!
Well done – like swimming through haiku 🙂
Great chain
10k sea birds, I must have seen a million of them. How do they find enough fish to eat?
just that day .. there were so many millions of fish that day. you couldn’t move without seeing 1000’s net to you… a man threw his net and in only one cast , he got so many, he stopped after the first cast.
There are so many birds there fishing, so there have to be lots of fish. I had sushi for dinner last night, but it isn’t the same thing.
lol
i am so sorry. my windows x p computer doesn’t work and i can’t click like on anything on this new one ,unless it appears in the reader.it doesn’t work